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Tuesday, July 5, 2016

Term 2 Writing- My Ultimate Bedroom by Breeze

My Ultimate Dream Bedroom. 
My ultimate dream bedroom is about netball. I play goal attack. I have the suitable netball shoes to play in.They have got a silver Nike tick on them. 
My walls are filled with netball positions. My carpet is black and white with beautiful stripes to match the silver fern colours. My bed has got the silver fern netball team on the duvet cover. My bed is very comfortable.
My drawers are half black and half white. There is also a secret wardrobe under my bed that you can not see. You can pull up the latch and go under the house.
Their are posters of netball players spread across the room, also black sparkles spread across the posters. A beautiful purple and pink Balinese rug is spread along the floor. On the Balinese quilt there is a big butterfly. It is amazing. 
I like my room because it's huge and I can hide secret stuff in my wardrobe under my house.
By Breeze

2 comments:

  1. Well done Breeze with your Ultimate Bedroom description. I like the way you have included paragraphs, so that you are expanding on one idea in each paragraph.
    NSL- to include more description in your sentences and use better sentence starter words.

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  2. Well done Breeze with your Ultimate Bedroom description. I like the way you have included paragraphs, so that you are expanding on one idea in each paragraph.
    NSL- to include more description in your sentences and use better sentence starter words.

    ReplyDelete

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