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Thursday, July 7, 2016

Term 2 Writing- My Dream Room by Chance

My Dream Room
As I walk into my new gaming room I feel as though I just walked into paradise, because I love gaming and I dream of a dream room. My dream room has a curtain that has a special button that makes it go up and down. There is a secret gaming desk that has lights on the sides.
My room also has an elevator to get into my it and there is also a hand scanner only for my hand.  
Next there are detailed things too like NBA 2  and gaming ones too I also have a wardrobe with an eye scanner.  
I like my room because it has all of my favourite things in it. 
By Chance

1 comment:

  1. Well done Chance with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
    NSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail.

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