My Leaf Creature.
My leaf creature known as devil, has fur softer than silk. He has brown eyes, a wriggly tail and looks so cute.
Devil eat's mice and bird's but mostly grow's on a fat diet of fish. Devil protects himself by digging amazingly deep hole's or using it's razor sharp claw's to scratch the predator.
Devil and Arctic seal's both grow on a fat diet of fish.
By Esther
Well done Esther on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included compound sentences in your descriptive paragraph.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand on main ideas in each paragraph.