My Dream Room
As I walk into my ultimate Kingdom Room, you can see my king sized bed in the corner and my huge golden mirror. This shows the whole room. At the back of the room is my massive bean bag. My carpet has real diamonds put into it .
As I look into my room I can see that on my bed, it has a white pale blanket and two fiery red pillows.
My golden mirror has awesome Koro patterns
and my gigantic bean bag has my name written all over it in different types of writing.
In my room it smells like peaches and blueberries. It makes my tummy rumble.
As I open my door I can hear loud music playing down stairs. As I take a nap I feel how squishy my bed is, that makes me fall asleep quickly.
I love my room because it is big and I get my own space.
By Energy
Well done Energy with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included more descriptive words in your compound sentences
ReplyDeleteNSL- to include more details that add to the main idea in your paragraphs.