My Leaf Creature- The Biter.
The Biter lives in the damp jungles of Australia.
He eats land crabs and worms. He also eats the eggs of birds.
When the Biter has to protect its self, he spins into a ball then shoots arrows at his predator.
He lives in rotten logs and bushes. His predators are bears, wolves, and spiders.
The Biter looks like a lizard with fur and spikes. He has a white face with a black body. He is not dangerous to humans but when threatened he will shot an arrow.
By James
Well done James on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included compound sentences in your descriptive paragraph.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand on the main ideas in each paragraph.