My Dream Room
As I walk into the room I see a huge black and red spotted desk with a few monitors on them. The monitors are switches on and have neon red backgrounds.There are so many things! A satisfying patterned bed and a blue gaming chair. The wallpaper is very bright with blue and red zigzags. I see two dark oak wardrobes beside my bed. The weird painted windows and the pillows are matching with the bed.
I can hear the clock slowly ticking as every second passes. The sound of the soft breeze of wind blowing on my face enters from the window. The door squeaks every time someone enters.
In the end I think this can be my next room!
By Kazuki
Well done Kazuki with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail. I would like you to pay special attention to your punctuation too.