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Thursday, July 7, 2016

Term 2 Describe/ Report Writing- My Leaf Creature by Keeley


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My Leaf Creature.  
My fantastic leaf creature lives in an enchanted forest in Australia, She is a fairly her name is Milly,
My leaf creature lives around lots of berries and fruit it to eat. My leaf creature has a pink petal dress, hair as Blonde as the sun and a pink crown. She has very delicate wings and ruby red eyes to see at night.
My leaf creature has a big tree that grows things like berries and fruit.  Milly also eats cookies, chocolate, honey and sometimes she will eat a little bit of toast if she can find some.
My leaf creature protects itself by hiding in a narrow burrow or a hole in a tree.  The predator will not fit down the hole. If Milly has to she will play dead.
An interesting fact is that Milly is the smallest animal /creature in the world. If a wing was broken it will grow back in 24 hours.  
My leaf creature is a very interesting creature.
By Keeley

1 comment:

  1. Well done Keeley on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included paragraphs, so that you are expanding on one idea in each paragraph.
    NSL- to continue to develop the detail in your paragraphs.

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