My warm dream room is a warm and bright room. The room is up stairs in my house. It has neat, bright, modern, brown walls with a light brown ceiling.
There's no windows or tv in the room but there are torches all around the room. There's a brown, soft, two seated sofa in the far corner of the room. The torches go from the door to the sofa attached to wooden poles, against the wall.
What makes the room warm is the heater. The heater is a medium sized, white, warming heater, it makes a sound like a car driving slowly across the road. Anyway you better close the door when you enter because the heat will escape.
By Sebastian Hague
Well done Sebastian with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail. I would like you to pay special attention to how you write about the detail too.