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Thursday, July 28, 2016

Term 2 Writing- My Dream Room by Maia

My Dream Room.   
My dream room! Gosh where do even start? Well, on my white door there is a sign that says in big golden letters "NO BOYS ALLOWED!"
My baby blue wallpaper is stunning it has black stars on the wallpaper. My bed is smooth and it has a remote that can make your head go up and down. Its the same with your feet, and it's a king size bunk bed with two TV's on both the top and bottom.
I LOVE my walk in wardrobe. Inside I have my sparkling white draws with diamond handles and my clothes hanging up in there on my sliver hangers. I also love my half egg hammock with a turquoise blanket.
I have photos of my family and friends displayed on the walls. My favourite photo would have to be the one of my best friends and I -Ashlee, Wendy and myself. Another favourite photo I have is with Ashlee, Keira, Keeley, Wendy and myself all saying "CHEESE".
On my ceiling there are fairy lights which are controlled by a switch on the wall which makes it dimer or brighter and on or off. I also have a spa in my room that has lights in it and it's very relaxing. My carpet is black and fluffy, I love walking through it over and over again. My light grey wooden desk has my Crome book computer on it.
I love my dream room, it's the best because it has everything I have always wanted and it is one of a kind.
By Maia.

2 comments:

  1. Well done Maia with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
    NSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail. I would like you to pay special attention to how you write about the detail too.

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