My Rugby Dream Room.
As you walk into my huge dream room you will see my huge tv, xbox one. On the right hand side there is my window. It turns into a huge tv and into a rugby field so I can practice.
It so cool because there are amazing cool things like my huge bed, it is a rugby field.My room has a secret slide in it but I have an eye scanner so don't tell everyone because no one knows. Then I have started to do my windows, my windows are shaped like a rugby post,
After I started putting my WWE and rugby signatures on the wall. Secondly I put my mirror in the corner of my room. My room smells like linx and fresh air. It sounds like my Xbox is vibrating in my room. My rock clock goes off and I have a poster,a mirror and my draws.
I like my amazing dream room because rugby is my favourite sport.
By Iraia
Well done Iraia with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail.