Dream Bed Room.
My dream room would have a king sized bed and two drawers for new clothes and cool clothes. Also I would have two desks for work and a computer.
I would have black and red wallpaper with white. I would have white curtains and the carpet would be made of bear fur that is white and fluffy. My blankets would be white with chrome pillows.
The window seats would be light red. A 100 inch tv that has 'My Sky' and a ps4 with all of the games for it sits on the wall.
My roof would have stars that glow in the dark that are green on the wallpaper. There would be stripes of gold and chrome.
My laptop and computer would be gold. You can smell the fresh air in my room. You can hear a water fall dripping.
I like my room because it's awesome.
If you could see my room you would be shocked how awesome and beautiful it is.
By James
Well done James with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail. I would like you to pay special attention to your punctuation too.
Well done James with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail. I would like you to pay special attention to your punctuation too.