As you step into my ultimate bedroom, you can smell the beautiful strawberry scent that makes me feel like I'm in heaven.
My bed is a swirling globe that circles around and around as I sleep peacefully. As I open my windows I can feel the wonderful breeze flowing. My curtains look like bats hanging in their cave, getting ready to hibernate.
My ceiling is covered with billions of planets and stars. When I look up at ceiling, they shin really bright and twinkle in the night sky.
As I look into the mirror on the edge I see spiraling snakes ready to bite. The wallpaper is like a shaded ocean blue, tossing and turning as the waves pass slowly across the sea. The carpet is covered with bear fur all over it and it's so comfortable it feels like a soft and cuddly blanket.
Sometimes as you enter my room,you might smell stinky socks hidden underneath my bed, as well as my blue berry shampoo. It's a really strong smell and it might affect your nose.
I love my ultimate bedroom it smells nice except for my socks. It looks neat and tidy and there is everything I like about it. One other thing I'd like to mention is that it's fantastic.
By Rychus
Wow! Fantastic Dream Room description Rychus. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound and complex sentences.You have also included paragraphs
ReplyDeleteNSL- to continue to expand on your ideas in your paragraphs