My Dream Bedroom.
When you first walk into my room you would say WOW! because it's a one of a kind.In my room you would see my walk in wardrobe stacked with my new clothes nicely. My New York bed is big in the corner of my room. My wallpaper is turquoise with black Eiffel Tower patterns on it.
The small things you might see are my blue desk by my bed, with a typewriter on top. There is a medium sized tank with fish,turtles and a seahorse. I have a computer and a laptop sits on another desk. Some collections of Nikes and Stussy are also on the desk.
In my room you can smell my perfume and my smiggle pens and pencils. My favourite pens and pencils are chocolate, jelly beans and sour apple.
I think my room is the best room anyone can have because it's a relaxing place to be.
By Keira
Well done Keira with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail. I would like you to pay special attention to your punctuation too