My Leaf Creature.
My amazing leaf creature is a shark. His name is Goldberg. It can fight different amazing sharks and it lives at the bottom of the sea.
My leaf creature looks like a huge monster with a 100 teeth. It looks like it wants to eat something and he has an awesome shiny body. He's is made out of shiny cool steal.
My fabulous cool leaf creature eats people,fish and other sharks. He creeps up on the fish or shark and waits for people to swim out to the deep.
By Iraia
Well done Iraiha on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included compound sentences in your descriptive paragraph.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand on main ideas in each paragraph.