My Dream Room.
As I enter my incredible netball themed bedroom, you will see that is shaped like a big netball. It is so comfortable. My duvet has netballs on it and netball hoops.
My pillows are shaped like netballs. My lamp is shaped like a netball hoop. When you look closely at the wall paper you can see all the netball teams names on it, and photos of all the teams all over it.
When you walk in, you can feel warm air giving you a hug. When you sit on my bed, it makes you go down into the mattress.
I like my room because I see a netball career for me in 10 years time that's why I feel happy.
By Sarah
Well done Sarah with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail. I would like you to pay special attention to how you write about the detail too
What an awesome room Sarah!
ReplyDelete