My Dream Room.
When you walk into my dream room you can smell strawberries and chocolate. The wallpaper is white with dull blue flowers and a chandelier is hanging from the centre of the roof. My bad is a new York bed with big white draws next to it and a love heart light on top, that lights up the whole room when it's dark.
The curtains have a constellation of stars with a Milky Way in the middle on them. On the side there is a netball poster with all of the silver ferns on it.
I like my bedroom because I have lots of room to practise my netball and hip hop dancing.
By Keeley
Well done Keeley with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail. I would like you to pay special attention to your punctuation too.