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Wednesday, July 6, 2016

Term 2 Writing- Fairy Dream Room by Phoebe

My Fairy Dream Room.
As I stepped into my room I see a bunk bed with a stair case and a circle swing sitting in the corner of my bed room.
The wallpaper has flowers on it and they are blue, yellow, green, white, pink and purple. The swing has flowers that are twisted through the vines with a pillow inside the swing. The floor is fake grass with four dogs, two cats and two birds. There is a table underneath the bunk bed.
By Phoebe

1 comment:

  1. Well done Phoebe on your Dream Room description. I like the way you have used lots of descriptive words in your sentences.
    NSL- to develop your ideas into paragraphs and add more description.

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