My Leaf Creature.
My fairy lives in a garden full of beautiful flowers. Every time she hears someone coming she goes into camouflage. My fairies name is Brooklyn.
My fairy has long blond hair that goes up to her heals. Her shoes are black ballet shoes with little silver butterflies on the end.
Brooklyn, my fairy, eats human biscuits. She can't eat a big biscuit like we do, so she shrinks it. Her favourite food is chocolate. She can't be bothered shrinking chocolate, so she just eats it. If she shrinks it there will be less then there was before.
Brooklyn protects herself because she has a lot of enemies like Giants, and other creatures. Mostly Giants, because they try and make fairy pie. So when she hears a giant stomping through the bushes she hides behind trees, because who wants to be eaten by a giant.
Brooklyn is the queen of all fairies. Fairies don't lay eggs they have babies like humans do. It's weird because a fairy having a baby. Fairies are two inches tall. They are quite small compared to humans. The fairy gets smaller and smaller by the time they get older.
By Sarah
Well done Sarah on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included paragraphs, so that you are expanding on one idea in each paragraph.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to continue to develop detail in your paragraphs as well as checking your punctuation.