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Thursday, July 28, 2016

Term 2 Describe/ Report Writing- My Leaf Creature- by Awatea


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My Leaf Creature
Is it a wolf? Yes. My creature lives in a really mossy yucky place and comes from Fiji and New Zealand. It can be seen in zoos but rarely. It also likes hot but warm countries too.
Appearance- The wolf looks very big. It has soft furry fur and has a small nose. Something really different about my wolf creature is that it has wings on the inside of its fur. It's skin tone is black with a bit of brown. The eye colour is like pow! It's so blue with some brown in side.
Protection- The way my wolf protects it self is to fly away when there is danger or it camouflage's itself in bushes or trees.  
Concussion- It is the best creature ever.
By Awatea

2 comments:

  1. Well done Awatea on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included paragraphs, so that you are expanding on one idea in each paragraph.
    NSL- to include more description in your sentences

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  2. Well done Awatea on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included paragraphs, so that you are expanding on one idea in each paragraph.
    NSL- to include more description in your sentences

    ReplyDelete

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