My leaf creature is a fairy. She is famous and her name is Isabel.
Isabel has a body, two eyes, black hair, two arms, two legs and a nose. She has brown flaky petals as a dress and pink cute rosie cheeks.
Isabel eats berries, apples, peaches, honey from the flowers, grass, moss, pinecones and camellia plants.
Isabel protects herself by using her wings and flying away. Isabel has a dog with two eyes, one tail and two legs.
Isabel loves dancing around the in her tree. She does ballet and jazz. Isabel lives in hollow oak trees.
By Phoebe
Well done Phoebe on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included paragraphs, so that you are expanding on one idea in each paragraph.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to continue to develop detail in your paragraphs as well as use different sentence starters.