Te Kura o nga Raupareparenga

Te Kura o nga Raupareparenga

Friday, June 17, 2016

Term 2 Describe/ Report Writing- My Leaf Creature by Kazuki


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My Leaf Creature.
My leaf creature is called Wormantor. It lives all around the world! Wormantor has a lot of features. It can sense danger from 3 km away, and it has extremely good vision. 
Wormantor has a strong piece of armour. It has these things because Wormantor has lots of predators and it is small. The Wormantor has a unique body. It has a very hard shell because the body of the Wormantor is very soft. It has super long claws to defend itself. 
In general Wormantor looks like a star with eyes and claws. 
In conclusion my leaf creature is an underground beast that eats worms and insects.
By Kazuki

2 comments:

  1. Well done Kazuki on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included compound sentences in your descriptive paragraph.
    NSL- to expand on the main ideas in each paragraph.

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  2. Well done Kazuki on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included compound sentences in your descriptive paragraph.
    NSL- to expand on the main ideas in each paragraph.

    ReplyDelete

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