Te Kura o nga Raupareparenga

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Friday, June 17, 2016

Term 2 Describe/ Report Writing- My Leaf Creature by Trey


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My Leaf Creature.
My leaf creature is an alien.  My creature is green and brown. It looks like a freak. It looks scary because it has two arms and no legs. Because he is an alien, he scares people. My creature eats people but it's favourite food is pandas. He likes kids, cats and dogs as well. He doesn't like birds because he's scared that they're going to fly around in his stomach. My alien can hear people from his planet. He can hear them talking about killing him. My creature can smell kids, babies and people because they smell stink. My creature feels that people are making a plan to get him.
By Trey

1 comment:

  1. Well done Trey on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have used lots of descriptive words in your sentences.
    NSL- to continue to develop descriptive sentences into paragraph

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