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Friday, June 17, 2016

Term 2 Writing- My Leaf Creature by Star


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My Leaf Creature.
My leaf creature looks like a flat fish. It has gills on its side. It has a white tail and two green eyes. My fish has a little fin on his back. My fish eats sardines. It also eats smaller fish. It doesn't eat jelly fish because they're poisonous. My fish is scared of sharks because it might get eaten by them. My fish protects itself by hiding in the seaweed.
By Star

1 comment:

  1. Well done Star on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have used lots of descriptive words in your sentences.
    NSL- to try starting each sentence with a different starter word like next, soon, after and so on.

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