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Friday, June 17, 2016

Term 2 Writing- My Leaf Creature by Tyrece


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My Leaf Creature
My leaf creature is a cheetah.  My cheetah has orange and black dots on its body. It has dots on its tail. It has whiskers and two ears. My cheetah can hear trees blowing and animals running in water. My cheetah can hear people screaming "a cheetah". My cheetah eats moose, fish and warthogs. My cheetah protects itself by sprinting up trees.
By Tyrece

1 comment:

  1. Well done Tyrece on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have used lots of descriptive words in your sentences.
    NSL- to continue to develop descriptive sentences into paragraph

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