My Dream Room.
As I walk into my dream room I see a beautiful basketball hoop, bed, hunting wall paper and old fashion windows. On the floor there's an under- water carpet.
In my room I can hear the clock going tick, tock. Outside I can hear dog's barking and the wind blowing in the trees, making a swishing sound. There are birds tweeting on my window sill.
In my room I can smell 'Black Knight Lynx' and yummy gooey porridge.
I like my room because I can run around, do slam dunks and play basketball. My room is the ultimate dream room.
By Tyrece
Well done Tyrece on your Dream Room description. I like the way you have used lots of descriptive words in your sentence
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