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Friday, June 17, 2016

Term 2 Describe/ Report Writing- My Leaf Creature- by Breeze


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My Leaf Creature.
My leaf creature is a fairy. She is 30 cm small. My fairy lives in a colourful garden full of fruit and berries.The fruit and berry fairies are related. When it's cold they snuggle up in hollow trees.
My fairy eats fruit and berries. Her favourite fruits are apples, oranges and all sorts of fruit. Her relations eat berries just like the fruit fairy, any kind of berries. They pick fruit and berries together out of the garden.
Some problems the fairies have are they don't have big eyes like humans, so they can't see properly. If she is getting threatened she can fly away.
My fairy is very magical and she has pixie-dust so she can fly. If she can't fly with pixie-dust she can only fly 100 metres. That's how far she fly's with her beautiful sparkling wings.
Even though my creature is small she still looks after her garden. My fairy is a fascinating flyer and hides to hibernate.
By Breeze

2 comments:

  1. Well done Breeze on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included paragraphs, so that you are expanding on one idea in each paragraph.
    NSL- to include more description in your sentences.

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