Leaf Creature
My creature is an elf and his name is Wish. Everything you wish for you get. He lives in the North Pole.
My creature is a very fat creature so he eats lots of sugary delicious candy (lollies).That means he went rogue so he steals his food.
When Wish protects itself he runs away from its enemy. This is because he is really strong and really fast. If his enemy catches Wish then he fights his enemy.
My creature has two gigantic ears,one squishy fat eye and he has one jumbo colourful hat. He has nice sparkly blue eyes like the beautiful blue sea, and white skin like white chocolate. His hair is browny black and is very calm.
My creatures favourite hobby is stealing stuff. He likes to gamble and he plays games a lot.
As you can see my creature is very special because it lives at the North Pole with Santa and works for Santa.
By Chance
Well done Chance on your Leaf Creature description. I like the way you have included paragraphs, so that you are expanding on one idea in each paragraph.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to start my sentences in a variety of ways and add more detasil to my sentences.