My Dream Bedroom
🔎zooming out -When you walk into my dream bedroom you can see a wooden bunk bed, blue curtains, blue wallpaper with cloud's, amazing slide up windows and a wooden mirror right in the corner.
🔍 zooming in - There are lot's of glowing star's on the slide up window's. Wooden flower design's are on the wooden mirror and last but not least there will be picture's of my favourite family moment's hanging on pins upon the white cloud's of the blue wall paper.
Smell- My dream bedroom has air freshener's that have the smell of loving strawberry rose flower's.
Hear- When you go to sleep on my dream bunk bed and wake up you hear bird's singing and music playing from my alarm.
By Esther
Well done Esther with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail.