My Dream Room
As I enter my amazing bed room perfume spikes tickle my nose.
As soon as I walk in I can see a netball court carpet,with a hoop at the far end of the room.
The wallpaper is a never ending rainbow.
The bed is as big as an elephant but with pink skin and white polka -dots all over it. The blanket is also soft warm and fuzzy.
The draws are old and brown, I also have a huge walk in wardrobe which is black with a white out lines. The best bit about it is that it has love heart door knobs and it opens with just my finger print.
On my draws there are bracelets,earrings and rings covering the whole draw. Next to the 50 inch tv is an Xbox,ps3 and a ps4.
There is one corner with shoes and another filled with netballs.
What I can hear in my room is the booming from the tv and Xbox.The cat is also hissing at the dog and the dog is barking at the cat.
I love my room because I can have my own space.
By Awatea
Well done Awatea with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail.