My Dream Room
As I enter my incredible netball themed room I can see my ceiling covered in bibs that they use in netball like wing defence etc. The colour of my background is violet which transports me into a Silver fern netball match.
When I walk in I see my queen sized bed. For the duvet it has netball all over it in many different colours. On the side of my bed there are these cute windows with a purple frame around them. The glass has little square panes.
While I wander around I see my purple walk in wardrobe with a netball hoop for my laundry.
When I look around I see the detailed things,such as posters of countries that I would like to go to and where netball games have happened.
There are also mirrors around my room. The mirror frames are decorated in famous drawings and graffiti. Beside my mirrors there are these purple drawers and for the handle knobs there are golden netballs. The thing about my drawers is that it automatically opens with my fingerprint.
The thing I like to feel, is my fuzzy wallpaper with patterns around it. It is fuzzy because there is fluff all over it. The next thing I like to feel is my duvet because it is nice and comfy to touch. When I get bored of feeling my duvet. I go on starting to feel my mirrors because it has smooth edges.
I like my dream room because I think it is one of a kind.
By : Kaveni
Well done Kaveni with your Dream Room description. I like the way you have included descriptive words in your compound sentences.
ReplyDeleteNSL- to expand your paragraph ideas and include more detail. I would like you to pay special attention to how you write about the detail too.